On Mon, 11 Apr 2011 06:31:30 +0000, Michael Witten wrote: > I did some copyediting whilst looking through udev/udev.xml; > this email contains a pull request as well as the inlined > diff of all the changes squashed together. > > The changes apply cleanly to 960250952193db522b8ced336bf998bd7e8e4a31: > > selinux: firmware - do not label files in runtime dir (2011-04-08 03:08:16 +0200) > > and are available here: > > git://github.com/mfwitten/udev.git docs/udev.xml > > Squash them if desired. > > Docs: udev.xml: Offset daemon name with commas > Docs: udev.xml: Remove commas (and unnecessary repetition) > Docs: udev.xml: `are' -> `is'; the subject is `Access' > Docs: udev.xml: Use present tense > Docs: udev.xml: Clarification through proper wording > Docs: udev.xml: `,' -> `;' > Docs: udev.xml: `key value' -> `key-value' > Docs: udev.xml: `,' -> `:' > Docs: udev.xml: Use `assignment' consistently > Docs: udev.xml: `comma-separated' is a better description > Docs: udev.xml: Remove unnecessary repitition > Docs: udev.xml: Add a few more words for context > Docs: udev.xml: Use `unless' for clarity > Docs: udev.xml: Clarify PROGRAM key > Docs: udev.xml: `a shell style' -> `shell-style' > Docs: udev.xml: Clean `*' description > Docs: udev.xml: Clean character range description > Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of NAME assignment key > Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of SYMLINK assignment key > Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of ENV assignment key > Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of RUN assignment key > Docs: udev.xml: Clean up description of LABEL assignment key > Docs: udev.xml: Add missing `.' > Docs: udev.xml: `which' -> `content of which' > Docs: udev.xml: `commandline' -> `command line' > Docs: udev.xml: Clean up WAIT_FOR description > Docs: udev.xml: `a' -> `the' > Docs: udev.xml: Clean up introduction to substitutions. > Docs: udev.xml: Use normal sentence structure > Docs: udev.xml: Actually make a separate paragraph > Docs: udev.xml: Add comma > Docs: udev.xml: `char' -> `character' > Docs: udev.xml: `comma-separated' is a better description > Docs: udev.xml: Clarify through a change in word ordering > Docs: udev.xml: Improved word order > Docs: udev.xml: Fix dangling modifier > > udev/udev.xml | 169 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------- > 1 files changed, 86 insertions(+), 83 deletions(-) > > [diff] Would someone like to commit this? -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-hotplug" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
