On 26/01/15 19:07, Jeff King wrote: > On Mon, Jan 26, 2015 at 04:48:33PM +0100, Michael J Gruber wrote: > >> - die(_("No existing author found with '%s'"), name); >> + die(_("--author '%s': neither 'Name <email>' nor a match for an existing author"), name); > > I had to add to the bikeshed, but I had to read this several times to > make sense of it. It is grammatically: > > X [is] neither Y nor Z > > except that by eliding the verb ("is"), I somehow had trouble making > sense of Z ("a match...") as a noun. > > I came up with: > > --author '%s': neither 'Name <email>' nor matches an existing author > > only to see that it was suggested earlier in the thread as a predecessor > to this. ;) > > I wonder if adding back in the missing verb, rather than a colon, would > also make more sense: > > --author '%s' is neither 'Name <email>' nor a match for an existing author > I usually don't like to add anything to the bikeshed, but ... This sounds odd to me, so maybe: --author '%s' is neither in the form of 'Name <email>' nor a match for an existing author although that is getting a bit long! :-D ATB, Ramsay Jones -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html