Re: [PATCH v2] Documentation: avoid dangling modifier for imap-send

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"brian m. carlson" <sandals@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> writes:

> Avoid a nonsensical misreading by moving the modifier closer to the
> word it modifies.
>
> Signed-off-by: brian m. carlson <sandals@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
> ---
>  Documentation/git-imap-send.txt | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/git-imap-send.txt b/Documentation/git-imap-send.txt
> index 875d283..23231e1 100644
> --- a/Documentation/git-imap-send.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/git-imap-send.txt
> @@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ imap.folder::
>  imap.tunnel::
>  	Command used to setup a tunnel to the IMAP server through which
>  	commands will be piped instead of using a direct network connection
> -	to the server. Required when imap.host is not set to use imap-send.
> +	to the server. Required to use imap-send when imap.host is not set.

To be honest, I find both versions are equally confusing.

How about dropping the three words "to use imap-send"?
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