Re: [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary

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On 25/05/14 20:37, Jeremiah Mahler wrote:
How about this:

   Eventually the upstream developer will do additional work in their
   repository.  Creating new commits and advancing the branches to point
   at the new commits.


The second sentence needs a verb. Maybe something along the lines of "When they ${do_X}, ${Y} will happen" ?

Regards, Ben


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