On Tue, Sep 11, 2012 at 03:32:47PM +0100, David Gould wrote: > Subject: Re: [PATCH] clear_child_for_cleanup must correctly manage > children_to_clean Thanks for the patch. Overall it looks good, but let me nit-pick your commit message a little (not because it is that horrible, but because you are so close to perfect that I want to fix the minor things and then encourage you to submit more patches :) ). Your subject is a bit vague, and it is not clear if it is not correct now, and this is a bugfix, or if it is a feature enhancement. I would have said something like: Subject: fix broken list iteration in clear_child_for_cleanup which is _also_ vague about what exactly the breakage is, but is clear that this is a bugfix. So then you can go on to describe the actual problem: We iterate through the list of children to cleanup, but do not keep our "last" pointer up to date. As a result, we may end up cutting off part of the list instead of removing a single element. And then describe your fix: > Iterate through children_to_clean using 'next' fields but with an > extra level of indirection. This allows us to update the chain when > we remove a child and saves us managing several variables around > the loop mechanism. which I think is good. > - last = &children_to_clean; > - for (p = children_to_clean; p; p = p->next) { > - if (p->pid == pid) { > - *last = p->next; > - free(p); > + for (pp = &children_to_clean; *pp; pp = &(*pp)->next) { > + if ((*pp)->pid == pid) { > + struct child_to_clean *clean_me = *pp; > + *pp = clean_me->next; > + free(clean_me); > return; > } I think using the indirect pointer is a nice compromise; it makes it clear from just the for loop that this is not an ordinary for-each traversal. You could hoist the extra pointer out of the conditional and save one set of parentheses in the "if" statement, but I don't think it is a big deal either way. Acked-by: Jeff King <peff@xxxxxxxx> Thanks for the bug report and the patch. -Peff -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe git" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html