Greetings, Great!Thanks for your very patient check and comments.This draft really has lots of mistakes which need to correct.I will have a modification immediately.Thank you again. Regards, Liam > On Mon, 2009-06-29 at 10:45 +0800, Liam wrote: >> Greetings, >> >> This is a draft (standard operating procedure) for Fedora Install >> test.This document involves process or steps by which QA organize >> install test in community. The purpose of SOP is to make QA's >> responsibilities transparent,so anyone can join + lead + contribute in >> this test in the near future. >> This page is only a draft now,need your suggestions and >> corrections,do you have some comments? >> The page of draft at: >> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Liam/Draft_Install_Test_SOP > > Nice! I think this starts to capture a fair amount of the steps > involved when attempting to organize collaborative testing against an > upcoming milestone (e.g. Alpha, Beta). > > * I've slightly reworded the introduction and moved it above the > table of contents. Hopefully this doesn't dilute the message > you were trying to convey, just let me know. > * Perhaps unintentional, the install test dates should be prior to > the official milestone release. The testing efforts described > in this process are intended to provide data for a GO / NO_GO > release decision. But you bring up a good point about > collecting results *after* the milestone has been released. > Perhaps we need to spell that out. I don't have any good > suggestions at the moment, I will contemplate a bit ... > > Some other minor suggestions I might offer: > * Perhaps similar to the comment Adam Williamson had regarding the > use of spacing around question mark '?' in the Xorg Debugging > document. Make sure to follow each period '.' with two spaces, > and each comma ',' with a single space. > * When linking to other pages on the wiki, try to use the > [[PageName]] syntax. > * FYI ... I've gone ahead and added this to the category > [[Category:QA SOPs]] > > Thanks, > James > -- fedora-test-list mailing list fedora-test-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-test-list