https://bugzilla.redhat.com/show_bug.cgi?id=828879 --- Comment #7 from Eric Sandeen <esandeen@xxxxxxxxxx> --- Ok, editorial nitpicks: > System Storage Manager provides easy to use command line interface to manage "provides an easy to use ..." > technologies via single unified interface. "technologies via a single unified interface." > You should install the ssm if you need Should probably say "You should install system-storage-manager if you need" ... And maybe 2 spaces (vs 1) after every sentence in the %description? Now I'll go point by point through review guidelines to make sure I'm not missing anything. Pretty simple specfile though! -- You are receiving this mail because: You are on the CC list for the bug. _______________________________________________ package-review mailing list package-review@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/package-review