Re: [Magazine] Upgrading to Fedora 24!

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Hey Woo,

On 06/08/2016 12:49 PM, Huiren Woo wrote:
Hey Justin,

Thanks for taking your time to write up this article!

Just trying to nitpick the details a little:

- Minor inconsistency: under "DNF Upgrade Plugin", the command lines
do not have the "$" whereas the other commands had "$" infront of it.

- Minor confusion: under "Update software and back up your system",
"To upgrade your system, use GNOME Software or enter the following
command in a terminal." imo should be "To update your software..."


Thanks for catching these, they were both confusing. I've update the original draft to fix both of these!

Once again, thanks! :)

PS: I saw a few articles you had on opensource.com and the latest one
was about "Imagine RIT", fantastic articles! :)

Glad to hear you enjoyed those reads! Thanks for letting me know, I appreciate it. :)


Best Regards,
Woo Huiren
Fedora Ambassador & Marketing | Open Organization Ambassador


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