Hey man,
Sorry my kid is getting moved into his own room and it's spawned a whole ordeal getting things up and running. I have screen shots waiting to upload as well as a couple of videos, but my target time was 1-2 weeks after F24 launches. I appreciate the other feedback, I think it'll be helpful and I'll try to incorporate those ideas in my next draft. =)
On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 4:43 PM Justin W. Flory <jflory7@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
Hey Brian,
Wanted to follow up on the status of the "Getting started with Fedora
Jam" article. In our meeting today, we reviewed the article, and it
looks good so far. We had a few suggestions for ways to expand the
article a little bit.
Adding some screenshots in of some software in the Jam Lab might be a
good idea to help give readers a visual of some of the software
available for use. This could be a screenshot of actual music production
or just a demo of something running, but any kind of screenshot should
do fine.
Additionally, we also thought it would be good to offer some more
background and introduction for Fedora Jam. Some questions that may be
helpful to answer to introduce the lab:
1) What can Fedora Jam be used for?
2) What kind of software is available for music production or mixing?
3) Why might a musician be interested in using Fedora Jam?
This should help offer a good introduction to the Lab and explain what
it is to readers. Adding download links to the bottom would also be
helpful to point readers where to get their hands on it!
Everything else so far looks good! We're looking at having this
published on Wednesday, 2016-06-01. If you think you would be able to
have the screenshots and/or edits in by the end of Sunday, that would be
best so we have time to do a final editing pass and get a featured image
for the article.
Let us know if you have any questions or other ideas for the article!
Thanks for working on this piece. :)
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Cheers,
Justin W. Flory
jflory7@xxxxxxxxx
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