Re: Query on Magazine post

Trupti Kini <kinitrupti@xxxxxxxxx> · Mon, 16 Feb 2015 15:55:54 +0530

Hi,

I have made the necessary alterations. Please let me know if anything else is required.

Regards,
Trupti Kini
Research Assistant, FOSSEE
Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay
http://fossevangelist.blogspot.in/

On Mon, Feb 9, 2015 at 8:48 PM, Ryan Lerch <rlerch@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

    On 02/08/2015 09:40 AM, Trupti Kini
      wrote:

      Hi,
            I have posted the article for publishing. How long it
          usually takes for the review? I wanted to add images to the
          article but I din't find Add media option. Can anyone
          please guide me?

                                          Regards,

                                          Trupti Kini

                                        Research
                                          Assistant, FOSSEE

                                          Aerospace lab, IIT Bombay

                                          http://fossevangelist.blogspot.in/

    Thanks for contributing to the Fedora Magazine, here are a few quick
    notes on your post:

    * Maybe tighten up the headline / title of the post a bit to make it
    more news-y. Something like:

    "Fedora community in Mumbai, India celebrates the Fedora 21 release"
    -- we have a global audience, so most won't know where or what "Homi
    Bhabha Centre for Science Education" is (i had to google it)

    * I'd probably open the article with a bit of filler about what a
    release party is. Maybe something like:

    "Every time a new release of Fedora becomes available, Fedora user
    communities around the world gather to share the new release with
    each other, upgrade their systems, and eat celebratory cake. In
    December, a release party was held at the..."

    * With the content under the opening paragraph, it is a little hard
    to follow if some of the statements about Fedora (GNOME, Openstack
    etc), were said by the speakers you call out, or if they are just
    statements about the release. 

    * For an article like this, describing what the speakers talked
    about is good, but try not to get into too much detail. Some of the
    quotes you have there are good stuff to include too.

    cheers,

    ryanlerch

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