On Fri, Sep 19, 2014 at 03:15:01AM -0400, Jaroslav Reznik wrote: > ----- Original Message ----- > > ----- Original Message ----- > > > On Tue, Sep 09, 2014 at 09:46:07AM -0400, Christian Schaller wrote: > > > > Hi everyone, > > > > Here are some draft notes I prepared to try to help our marketing team > > > > build up some release notes and press material on the Fedora Workstation > > > > release. > > > > Already sent it to the Working Group members, but I thought I send it out > > > > to these two > > > > lists for further review and suggestions. > > > > > > I took a shot at revising Christian's notes, using the feedback from > > > the thread thus far. With this revision I tried to reduce the level > > > of formality, the amount of technical terminology, and overall > > > sentence length and complexity. I also introduced some bullet points > > > where I felt it made the text more readable. I also renamed the > > > Software tool here to "App Catalog" because the ease of the tool does > > > remind me of e.g. a retail store catalog. > > > > Hi Paul, > > thanks - as we're now Go for Fedora 21 Alpha, please move it to the > > announcement wiki. For Alpha, I'd probably limit the scope of WS > > notes a bit, not to create a huge document nobody reads and add more > > details for final release. As we plan for final release to have own > > page for all products. > > > > Ideally on Monday, so then we can prepare text formatted version to > > be announced on Tuesday morning US time. > > I forgot to link wiki - https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F21_Alpha_release_announcement I understood these longer notes were intended for final release. Maybe the WG members can confirm, and I'll fix/post as needed. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
