I will get out my editorial chisel in a few hours and get to work :) I'll give you a heads-up when I'm done so you can pass it to dan. Thanks, nelson! -robyn On 4/15/10, Nelson Marques <07721@xxxxxxx> wrote: > > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/NetworkManager_in_Fedora_13 > > > Needs some editing and corrections for syntax and what-so-ever. > Robyn, your chisel skills ? > > I'm going to upload screenshots soon, later today and do so minor > tweaking on a couple of aspects. > > I am not sure if that was what was pretended, and I've leaded the > interview with Dan to another perspective. I hope I've focused enough on > NetworkManager, but redoing features that were previously entered on the > wiki by Dan seemed to be a waste of time, specially with his kick ass > blog article online. > > So I've tried to led the interview a bit more into the developing and > tried to present our users a bit more of a personal approach of one of > Red Hat upstream project maintainers. > > Feel free to send feedback, whatever... before we freeze it. Once we > have our editorial cuts and screenshots up, and plus from marketing, > I'll send it to Dan for his review and some corrections he might want to > enforce, and then we can go live. > > Also tweaking the interview page, which is a bit of copy/paste. > > nelson > > > > > > > On Wed, 2010-03-31 at 01:35 +0100, Nelson Marques wrote: >> As most will know, I've got assigned with the NetworkManager Feature >> Profiles. To accomplish this, I would like to point the following: >> >> - https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Marketing/Network_Manager_Workbench >> >> This is where I'm going to gather all the information I've collected. >> This is not in any way a final version or something that will remain for >> long. This is basically for me to work out a structure and later on will >> move the reviewed contents to the final destination that someone will >> provide me (Mel et all, could provide some input for the right place and >> designation for this?). >> >> Furthermore: >> >> * The screenshots are not definitive, it's just a caption of things I >> found relevant and might change depending on the interviews. >> * I will use this very same page to work the raw interview material >> (edited). Anyone has a though about where to place the un-edited >> material for later usage if needed ? >> * The screenshots do not hold valid information. No need to camp my >> house door for free internet, or to worry about something regarding it's >> information. >> * I've taken the screenshots on Fedora 12, with a vanilla user, using >> the vanilla pre-set artwork (GNOME + GTK Fedora Theme + Default pointer, >> etc). >> * Everyone is free to participate and edit (specially english native >> speakers, since English isn't my native language). >> * Any suggestions will be considered (most likely added/reviewed), I've >> kept a special place (end of page) for anyone's suggestions. >> >> >> Working on: >> >> - Gathering background information regarding NetworkManager. >> - Preparing Interviews for developers. >> - wiki skills. >> >> As always feel free to highlight and participate with comments, >> suggestions, information, critics and whatever you find relevant. >> >> Thanks all for surviving this wall of text. >> >> nmarques >> >> >> >> -- >> Nelson Marques >> Private Contact- 07721@xxxxxxx >> > > > -- > marketing mailing list > marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing > -- Sent from my mobile device -- marketing mailing list marketing@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/marketing
