On 28/02/2008, Marc Wiriadisastra <marc@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > <snip> > > I have added some sections to it. I've tried to target it to the user > experience and keep it simple. I've added links to more information if > the user is interested. > > I hope I didn't go over the top but I've kept it as simple as possible > while still trying to explain the benefit. Ah thanks Marc :) I've taken a look and personally think it could maybe focus a little more on exactly what the changes are, but this is just my opinion and I think I'm going to wait until the marketing meeting this evening before making any more changes myself. Ultimately I think you're heading in the right direction though, maybe just needs trimming a little. Best wishes, Jon -- Fedora-marketing-list mailing list Fedora-marketing-list@xxxxxxxxxx https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-marketing-list
