On Mon, 2008-02-04 at 13:53 +0000, Jonathan Roberts wrote: > Right, > > I think I've finished doing all the integration I can face right now > between those two documents. Karsten, I've tried to restyle it a bit > to your proposal for the "One summary to rule them all" idea and I've > tidied up the language where possible. > > http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JonathanRoberts/F9AlphaNotes Sorry I arrived late in this discussion. I did a final edit of the Releases/9/Alpha/ReleaseNotes this morning. Had you already merged in your changes? Your namespace draft and the one I edited appear at a glance to be the same. > At the minute it's very text heavy, some screenshots from people > running rawhide would be very cool. We could, but let's also let folks do that and blog about it directly. I don't want to get into the habit of providing too many screenshots for the release notes. A little bit is good marketing value, but a highly significant part of our userbase cares more about a correct feature list first and identification of major improvements/changes. > Also, I think the following > sections probably still need work: > > "Applications" - It might be good to either expand on what's new in > Firefox 3 or to find some more applications that we'd like to draw > attention to upgrades? > > "Anaconda Installer Improvements" - perhaps somebody who knows more > than I do could explain why people should care about these? Basically, > I'd like to find some friendlier language to describe these > improvements... > > "Kernel" - Same as Anaconda really, any chance we can make this friendlier? > > The other thing I think we could do with is a consistent way to link > to both feature pages and upstream pages so readers can easily find > more info. > > OK, besides that I'm quite happy with the shape it's in, but I don't > know what other people think? We can continue to edit it from here, that is one reason we use the wiki for Alpha and Beta release notes. - Karsten -- Karsten Wade, Developer Community Mgr. Dev Fu : http://developer.redhatmagazine.com Fedora : http://quaid.fedorapeople.org gpg key : AD0E0C41
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