Right, I think I've finished doing all the integration I can face right now between those two documents. Karsten, I've tried to restyle it a bit to your proposal for the "One summary to rule them all" idea and I've tidied up the language where possible. http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JonathanRoberts/F9AlphaNotes At the minute it's very text heavy, some screenshots from people running rawhide would be very cool. Also, I think the following sections probably still need work: "Applications" - It might be good to either expand on what's new in Firefox 3 or to find some more applications that we'd like to draw attention to upgrades? "Anaconda Installer Improvements" - perhaps somebody who knows more than I do could explain why people should care about these? Basically, I'd like to find some friendlier language to describe these improvements... "Kernel" - Same as Anaconda really, any chance we can make this friendlier? The other thing I think we could do with is a consistent way to link to both feature pages and upstream pages so readers can easily find more info. OK, besides that I'm quite happy with the shape it's in, but I don't know what other people think? Best wishes, Jon -- Fedora-marketing-list mailing list Fedora-marketing-list@xxxxxxxxxx https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-marketing-list
