Jonathan Roberts wrote:
Hi all, I've put up a few bits and pieces for the overviews so far. http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/JonathanRoberts/F8Overview What do people think? Is the text appropriate/long enough/too long/giving correct information!? Would be good to get some feedback before I go on too much further so I know I'm heading along the right tracks!
I think we need to change the track a bit. Use very simple language. Less technical. Talk about benefits before features, fill them with screenshots and screencasts, Some comparisons.
http://news.opensuse.org/?p=341 http://news.opensuse.org/?p=400 http://www.ubuntu.com/getubuntu/releasenotes/710tour http://wiki.mandriva.com/en/Releases/Mandriva/2008.0/Tour http://wiki.mandriva.com/en/Releases/Mandriva/2008.0/Notes Rahul -- Fedora-marketing-list mailing list Fedora-marketing-list@xxxxxxxxxx https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-marketing-list
