Re: Contributing docs for maintaining and creating a Fedora remix

[Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein@xxxxxxxxx>]

Hi Bex
I would have asked the author to rephrase the following

From

Once the RPM build finishes, a responsible team member then needs to connect to the build server via SSH in order to sign the completed RPM package using:

To

Once the RPM build completes, a responsible team member connects to the build server via SSH in order to sign the completed RPM package using:

or

After the RPM build successfully completes, a responsible team member uses SSH to connect to the build server in order to sign the completed RPM package using:

As I mentioned several times, I am able to write and to edit.  But I find my schedule not compatible with "chat". I would do my markups and either make changes to a copy or send my changed to the author(s).

My tools for editing:  I use LibreOffice Writer,  wps or MS writer, as each contains "change flagging" and ability to add comments to the document.

 

Regards

 Leslie

Leslie Satenstein

Montréal Québec, Canada

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From: Brian (bex) Exelbierd <bexelbie@xxxxxxxxxx>
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Subject: Re: Contributing docs for maintaining and creating a Fedora remix

+devel list to attract feedback from other folks in releng or working on other remixes and spins

On Mon, Apr 23, 2018 at 7:04 PM, Aidan Kahrs <abkahrs@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Hello.
I know this thread has been kinda quiet the last few days. I wanted to put out an update that the draft documentation is finished. I have gotten input from my team. I would now like input from people within the docs effort before I say it is ready to publish.

The draft docs can be found at https://pagure.io/fedora-docs/ remix-building/blob/master/f/r emix-ci.adoc

One comment:

14: Why is this server required to be a CentOS server?  I have no problem with CentOS but we should explain that choice in the context of a Fedora Remix.

 

The rest reads fine.  I hope other releng/remix/spin folks will comment on the technical details.

regards,

bex

DocGist was misbehaving so I was unable to get a rendered preview.

Please let me know what you think.

Thank you.

Sincerely,

Aidan Kahrs

abkahrs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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