-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA512 Leslie: On 26 April 2014 16:33:53 Leslie S Satenstein wrote: > Hi Pete and Documentationalists. > > May I also suggest that a the person reading this section of release notes > is assumed to have prior Linux knowledge > > I took the Fedora 20 release notes and marked them up so that they read much > better. By read much better, the opening paragraph of the attached document > explains the "raison d'être". > > If the attachment is lost, please refer to my public link > https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/42050559/wip/ReleaseNotes%20Touchups.od > t (release notes touchup) > > Hope to get your feedback, either favourable or other. A majority of the Release Notes content is written from scratch with every release. On the other hand, the content in Chapter 1 is mostly carried from one release to the next. Within the next couple of days, I'll review your comments about Chapter 1, then return them in an ODT file. After this, you can incorporate your revisions either into the Release Notes git repository or on the wiki, along with updates for Fedora 21, to heave them included in the next release. Will this work for you? Christopher -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.22 (GNU/Linux) iQIcBAEBCgAGBQJTYIBHAAoJEAWCcTQ3FNFM+OUQAJ73uANJLbNF0SdSjms3eJqh XkQaUxDqM0l3zQejR9cfVm0Q1oDlcmRJa9F8jDi/SBF5+8w/DGVhiWVtrQrmbbD7 XAKcfi1QF3OlcB0Uh5akrrfns7SmlqtnFCNnzXKuJmBsS/pRSjEx9VNZ9rxvCC/c aZ/juz0SrPo2iy2DWiGNAFwKikTujNnDXN/pZzvOjslL/9kbp46i0SHy6YnPH/6v IxJfQqYph5MnyaqCPhRbT13aXZAKpIN5t3QyZ0kWOdeqh5lZRDvSfMf6AEuVgWfg Gn70skHvVSevuQ5nq2GeNmyGgrDNL3lZAE3NV8w0cpntrYz00+upgSCSGocV0OdW FVjLpH2EsYjObtKKvBPthi4/Rk6iFwMSKqb1gJAqlFWsOeeiZTdwqGo95kj6g+fI 2iQTN7QGoqFQeeOJFfoZiGLsZI6xIHt+EKEk9WSelCYU743mT++89xXKF9K3BAVI 24d2ngC76ZFpqSyrs737P8nrz3052XawNuwmJubLX38EFxLQdEHg1IJS9+IhpglE rnPT+YHyoy7Q+I/36KLo602fV1/9veL5YG2Dia3gNPMi8+tLHS0gEgXH7syU370x 8grA1Ls8K03J1hRCkcOQu/UdXDw/ZTF+cbtVPvQxQYiKZTECETqNLr6lgnLXydvT 4AsLh574gwJUIEw0xNeo =hP03 -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- docs mailing list docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/docs
