Re: Comment about Installation

[Leslie S Satenstein <lsatenstein@xxxxxxxxx>]

done

 

Regards

 Leslie

Mr. Leslie Satenstein
An experienced Information Technology specialist.
Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,
and tomorrow will be even better.

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From: Christopher Antila <crantila@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
To: docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Sent: Sunday, August 25, 2013 3:48 PM
Subject: Re: Comment about Installation

Leslie:

It looks like you found some areas that could certainly use improvement!
If you would please report these issues on Bugzilla, with "Fedora
Documentation" as the product and "installation-guide" as the component,
we could track the revisions in the customary Docs Project way.
Reporting issues by email alone means they are more likely to be forgotten.


Thanks,
Christopher

On 08/24/2013 10:05 PM, Leslie S Satenstein wrote:
>
> I noted the following
>
>
>  http://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/19/html/Installation_Guide/s1-pkgselection-x86.html
>
>
>    Note
>
> Only one desktop environment can be selected at install time. To install
> additional environments once Fedora is installed, use the *Software*
> tool or the |yum groupinstall| command.
>
>
>
> I do not recall a previous mention of yum in this guide. We who are
> familiar with Fedora know yum as the command line system software tool
> that accompanies Fedora.  Perhaps we need to elaborate with a footnote,
> about yum and where to fetch the yum documentation.
>
>
>
> 
> Regards
> *
>  Leslie
> *
> *Mr. Leslie Satenstein
> *An experienced Information Technology specialist.
> Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,
> and tomorrow will be even better.
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>    ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>    *From:* Pete Travis <me@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
>    *To:* For participants of the Documentation Project
>    <docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
>    *Sent:* Friday, August 23, 2013 6:54 PM
>    *Subject:* Re: Self Introduction
>
>    On 08/23/2013 03:20 PM, Samuel W. Flint wrote:
>    > I'd be interested in proofing and contributing to the Amateur
>    Radio Guide.
>    >
>    > Sam
>    > On Fri, August 23, 2013 2:40 pm, Jérôme Fenal wrote:
>    >> 2013/8/23 Samuel W. Flint <swflint@xxxxxxxxxxxx
>    <mailto:swflint@xxxxxxxxxxxx>>
>    >>
>    >>> Well, I can't say I've done much writing in the past, or worked
>    on any
>    >>> big
>    >>> name free-software projects, but I do have a bit of code up on the
>    >>> EmacsWiki.
>    >>> I have fairly advanced computer skills, no degree, but otherwise
>    I do
>    >>> have
>    >>> programming and administrative skills.
>    >>> I have moderate people skills, and can speak well, having a firm
>    grasp
>    >>> of
>    >>> the English language.
>    >>> I feel I am an excellent match for this project because I have an
>    >>> understanding of the English language and of the technical concepts
>    >>> required for it.
>    >>>
>    >>>
>    >> âHi Sam, and welcome!
>    >>
>    >> On which documentation project woud you like to contribute, and
>    in which
>    >> area?
>    >>
>    >> You may want to review the docs table at
>    >> https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs_Project_guides_tableâ,
>    <https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs_Project_guides_table%C3%A2,>and
>    tell us
>    >> where you'd like to start, either by proofreading (and getting a
>    grasp on
>    >> Docbook and the publican tool chain), or by contributing content
>    on the
>    >> guides needing love.
>    >>
>    >> Surely people here will guide you.
>    >>
>    >> Welcome again,
>    >>
>    >> J.
>    >> --
>    >> Jérôme Fenal
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>    >
>    Hi Sam, welcome to the team.
>
>    I've sponsored your membership in the 'docs' FAS group. Now you can
>    participate in elections, go vote for a release name!
>
>    The table Jérôme linked to has a column that will lead you to the git
>    repo for the Guides. I think you'll get the hang of docbook pretty
>    quickly, but the hardest part IMO is writing the content and I suggest
>    you dive into that first. We can help you with the markup as needed; I'm
>    happy to help where I can, and that's true of many people.
>
>    Many of us hang out in #fedora-docs and more watch the mailing list.
>    I'm looking forward to working with you here and there.
>
>
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