Some people on the Documentation project don't like have proof reading done. SO, my last bugzilla posting about proof read is the last that I have done, since there is no appreciation given for the effort.
Writing is a very tough assignment, A proof reader has to do QA on the text, and ensure that the language is global. For example, American English is not fully global.
So here below again is a brief response to the latest topic.
Just a congratulations for a great release note
Here is a comment for web page http://fedorapeople.org/groups/docs/release-notes/en-US/sect-Release_Notes-Changes_for_Sysadmin.html
For a first time user, or a system administrator new to Fedora, He will ask "what is a kickstart" file. Perhaps there should be a reference to its construction or how it is used. It is an idea for Fedora 20.
In section 2.3.1
inside the box, previously we had in bold "dracut --regenerate-all
--force". Being bold made it a good eye-catcher. Any chance bold it?
Ignore my yesterday's
comment about boost. Yesterday the links to boost libraries produced
a 404 error (no host). Today that server is up and the links are
satisfied.
2.8.1. MariaDB
Fedora 19 features MariaDB, an improved and more open fork of MySQL with a thriving community.
The "with a thriving community" should be removed. Does "thriving community" refer to MySQL or to MariaDB?
In the 4.2.3. MEMSTOMP section, what is DSO? The only idea I came up with was "Dynamic Storage Optimization".
The notes that I reviewed today are really in good shape. Now to review the french versions. (grin)
Leslie
Mr. Leslie Satenstein
An experienced Information Technology specialist.
Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,
and tomorrow will be even better.
lsatenstein@xxxxxxxxxAn experienced Information Technology specialist.
Yesterday was a good day, today is a better day,
and tomorrow will be even better.
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From: Adam Williamson <awilliam@xxxxxxxxxx>
To: Jérôme Fenal <jfenal@xxxxxxxxx>
Cc: For participants of the Documentation Project <docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Sent: Tuesday, June 25, 2013 3:24 AM
Subject: Re: Release Notes RPM status
On Tue, 2013-06-25 at 09:22 +0200, Jérôme Fenal wrote:
> 2013/6/25 Pete Travis <me@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>:
> >
> > On Jun 25, 2013 12:46 AM, "Adam Williamson" <awilliam@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> >>
> >> Welcome Petr!
> >>
> >> I just realized we sent F19 Final RC1 out but I forgot to check in with
> >> docs team if you were planning to have a newer fedora-release-notes
> >> package in the final release. Is fedora-release-notes-19-0.12 - the
> >> current stable build - okay to go out in the release? Or do we need
> >> another build? Thanks!
>
> Welcome Petr, hi all,
>
> FYI, French translations have been updated and are now back at 100% completion.
>
> I'll ask for a last proofreading from the list today, for the strings
> not yet proofread.
Thanks folks. Just to let you know we're on a very tight deadline here:
go/no-go is thursday, we really need a build by tomorrow. sorry I didn't
check in to co-ordinate this earlier.
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