On Tue, 2011-10-25 at 09:40 -0400, Ben Cotton wrote: > On Tue, Oct 25, 2011 at 7:19 AM, John J. McDonough <wb8rcr@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > > > I would reword that a little > > Good call. I've edited it as you suggested. That sentence was > originally copypasta from the KDE website and somewhere along the > rewording I forgot how to English. It sounded kinda Cajun. I was about to suggest you could make it sound more Cajun by replacing "can" with "might could". -- docs mailing list docs@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/docs
