-----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Elizabeth Ann West wrote: > operating system. These suggestions below are only for the Desktop Users > Guide, the specialized guide for new users of Fedora, presumably coming > from Windows, without Linux experience. Some of the users may be having no prior experience with computers. Manuals for such people should include screen shots ... and that is an optimization problem! > > For discussion purposes, this is the old page: > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs/Drafts/DesktopUserGuide/Financial > > This is the new and improved page: > https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User_Guide-Financial_Software > 1. New user does not learn about the name of the Add/Remove Software program. The first occurrence of "Add/Remove Software program" can be replaced by "Add/Remove Software program (called 'Pirut')". 2. 'kicker' is the whole of the main panel. "Fedora icon in the lower left corner called the Kicker" is just wrong. 3. There are two minor typos towards the end...."kickerand" and a missing 'on' in the last line Otherwise, it is good. Best A. Mani -- A. Mani Member, Cal. Math. Soc -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.6 (GNU/Linux) Comment: http://getfiregpg.org iD8DBQFI6U3ToIK4BlImohYRAnEHAJwPk0AeS/QEDSvd9C0Vlh09qqpukgCgpNMA cisb2As5ShtJFzHn9Xtuwik= =FuFB -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- -- fedora-docs-list mailing list fedora-docs-list@xxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe: https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-docs-list
