Hi You should probably add the instructions to download and burn a ISO or link to appropriate documentation.Many users are unsure of which ISO's are needed. Specifically make sure you explain to them that the images containing srpms are NOT required and how many images and required for the basic installation. It would very useful to include instructions for burning a image from Windows also http://linuxiso.org/viewdoc.php/isofaq.html The above seems to fit the needs well. " Fedora Core does not support installation with diskettes." I suppose you mean floppy disks here. Make sure the language is more explicit throughout the guide "No changes are made to your computer until package installation commences." " The Fedora installation system has three elements" Non native speakers would probably appreciate a more basic form. replace commences with starts and elements with parts of something similar. This applies for the whole documentation "Insert CD 1 into the CD or DVD drive." The user has an option to download and use the DVD so it should be something like "Insert the first CD/DVD into the CD/DVD drive" SELinux is likely to be transparent to the end users but administrators who are new to the concept would certainly want to learn better about it and it is NOT transparent to them in all occasions. This is one of the reasons why I wanted you to link to the selinux faq http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-faq-fc2/ http://fedora.redhat.com/docs/selinux-faq-fc3test2/ "You can also launch the system administration tools included in Fedora Core from any user account using the root password." This would be a more precise version. "It is recommended that you use user system as a normal(non root)user. Any system administration tools in the graphical user interface would prompt for a root password if its required" Make sure you mention that the configuration stuff that is setup using the "setup agent" is OPTIONAL. This is one of the reasons why firstboot has been split up from anaconda "If you have to reconfigure the sound card later, you can use the system-config-soundcard utility. This is the menu item System Settings->Soundcard Detection." make sure you mention the menu item first and follow it by command line equivalents wherever appropriate. we should be targetting end users who are comfortable using the GUI better I request you put up screenshots wherever applicable atleast temporarily. It would help me associate the content with the appropriate screens better.(just for review purposes) regards Rahul Sundaram __________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? Yahoo! Mail - You care about security. So do we. http://promotions.yahoo.com/new_mail
