Some additional corrections or re-interpretations below, with a nod to correct style: On Tue, 2004-10-26 at 16:25, Rahul Sundaram wrote: > " Fedora Core does not support installation with > diskettes." > > I suppose you mean floppy disks here. Make sure the > language is more explicit throughout the guide Also, it would be better to say "from diskettes." > "Insert CD 1 into the CD or DVD drive." > > The user has an option to download and use the DVD so > it should be something like "Insert the first CD/DVD > into the CD/DVD drive" No slashes please -- try: "Insert the first disc into the CD or DVD drive." (Notice that "disc" is generic.) > "You can also launch the system administration tools > included in Fedora Core from any user account using > the root password." > > This would be a more precise version. "It is > recommended that you use user system as a normal(non > root)user. Any system administration tools in the > graphical user interface would prompt for a root > password if its required" But please avoid passive voice. Try: "You should use your &FC; system as a normal, non-root user. System administration tools which require administrator access will prompt you for the password for the root account." (Note that this works outside the GUI as well, e.g. printconf.) > "If you have to reconfigure the sound card later, you > can use the system-config-soundcard utility. This is > the menu item System Settings->Soundcard Detection." "If you have to reconfigure the sound card later, use the system-config-soundcard utility. From the GUI menu, choose System Settings, Soundcard Detection." > make sure you mention the menu item first and follow > it by command line equivalents wherever appropriate. > we should be targetting end users who are comfortable > using the GUI better I think the above statement takes care of everyone. Non-CLI friendly users will ignore the program name and follow the GUI steps. Saving the program name until second will probably often result in tortured syntax. Just an editorial $0.02... -- Paul W. Frields, RHCE