Mark McLoughlin wrote:
I'd suggest the tone should be less prescriptive - i.e. not so much "you must do foo" - and also give some rationale. e.g. "when preparing your update, consider what the user will see and how they will decide whether they should apply the update".
I am probably not going to be very good at doing this. Do you want to try? Rahul -- fedora-devel-list mailing list fedora-devel-list@xxxxxxxxxx https://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-devel-list
