On Wed, Oct 21, 2015 at 10:30:07AM -0400, Matthew Miller wrote: > On Wed, Oct 14, 2015 at 03:57:40PM -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote: > > I started making notes for the F23 Final release of Workstation here: > > <https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/F23_Final_release_announcement#Fedora_Workstation> > > I'd like to take most of this stuff *out* of the release annoucement, > and move to release notes. > > I'd like the annoucement to be mainly targeted at new or casual users, > and for each of the editions, I think we want just > > - the quick elevator pitch (OS system for your laptop or desktop computer > targeted at developers) > > - a one-liner describing the most exciting new things (maybe that's > just "updated GNOME, which is much shinier") > > - an action statement — "For a better desktop experience which fits > your daily workflow, download Fedora Workstation now" > > except, probably, different words. Okey dokey, edits in. -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com -- desktop mailing list desktop@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/desktop
