Hi Michael, Thanks for the feedback. On Tue, 2015-06-16 at 13:15 -0500, Michael Catanzaro wrote: > It looks great as a flyer to give to people who already use Fedora > and > want to see what's new in F22 that wasn't there in F21. The "Other > improvements" section is getting a bit technical, but that might be > fine depending on the target audience. I've basically picked up stuff from the release notes - this is all just a draft - a proof of concept pretty much. :) > > I don't think this would be an effective flyer to hand to people who > don't already use Fedora, since it focuses on changes in F22 and > assumes prior knowledge of the operating system (what is "GNOME > Shell?"). Presumably that's not the target audience of this flyer? We're discussing this on the ambassadors list. It's quite difficult to have a single flyer that can target newbies + current users + advanced users - they are looking for different information and need to be approached differently. I'm working on a plan here: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Ankursinha/Marketing_Collateral_Ide as It'll be great if the WGs could discuss how they want to market their product a little and provide the marketing team with their suggestions/requirements/ideas. > > A nit: don't put quotes around overlay scrollbars (or other things > that > aren't quotes). That makes it seem like they're not overlay > scrollbars > at all, but some sort of euphemism. For example: http://distractify.c > om/people/the-30-most-unnecessary-uses-of-quotation-marks-in- > history/ -- you "matter" to us means you do not matter to us, > "beer" means the beer is so terrible it's almost not really beer, > "new" > underwear means it's been used, etc. Ah, on it! -- Thanks, Regards, Ankur Sinha "FranciscoD" http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Ankursinha
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