On Tue, 2015-06-16 at 13:31 -0400, Josh Boyer wrote: > Does anyone else from the Workstation WG have more feedback for > Ankur? > It would be nice for a simple "looks good" if there is nothing > further the WG would like to see changed. It looks great as a flyer to give to people who already use Fedora and want to see what's new in F22 that wasn't there in F21. The "Other improvements" section is getting a bit technical, but that might be fine depending on the target audience. I don't think this would be an effective flyer to hand to people who don't already use Fedora, since it focuses on changes in F22 and assumes prior knowledge of the operating system (what is "GNOME Shell?"). Presumably that's not the target audience of this flyer? A nit: don't put quotes around overlay scrollbars (or other things that aren't quotes). That makes it seem like they're not overlay scrollbars at all, but some sort of euphemism. For example: http://distractify.com/people/the-30-most-unnecessary-uses-of-quotation-marks-in- history/ -- you "matter" to us means you do not matter to us, "beer" means the beer is so terrible it's almost not really beer, "new" underwear means it's been used, etc. Michael -- desktop mailing list desktop@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/desktop
