On Thu, 2015-01-08 at 09:15 -0500, Bastien Nocera wrote: Hi Bastien, > A couple of comments: > - I would add a version on the front page, as you have content that's > very > version specific inside Ah, makes sense. I can add that. > - I would also clip the screenshots, not include whole desktops as > it's > likely not going to be printed with enough details to be > readable/visible I noticed that the screenshots weren't too helpful. Do you think removing the screenshots and using logos would be better? For example, the devassistant logo instead of the screenshot? Even if I trim them to only have the applications in there, they're still quite small. > - the section about future versions should have more concrete details > rather > than what seems like a list of buzzwords. I'll work on this. I shamelessly plagiarised the release announcement in this version. We'll probably improve the text all over a bit. Thanks for the feedback. More is always welcome: https://github.com/sanjayankur31/fedora-flyer-workstation/issues -- Thanks, Regards, Ankur Sinha "FranciscoD" http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Ankursinha
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