Hey, ----- Original Message ----- > Hi, > > I've drafted up a flyer for the Fedora 21 workstation edition that can > be used at events by community members. Would someone have the time to > glance at it and provide feedback? I'd like to complete it as soon as > possible with release parties and more events coming up quickly. > > The marketing trac ticket is here: > https://fedorahosted.org/marketing-team/ticket/186 > > The pdfs generated are here: > https://ankursinha.fedorapeople.org/fedora-flyer-workstation/ A couple of comments: - I would add a version on the front page, as you have content that's very version specific inside - I would also clip the screenshots, not include whole desktops as it's likely not going to be printed with enough details to be readable/visible - the section about future versions should have more concrete details rather than what seems like a list of buzzwords. Looking good! -- desktop mailing list desktop@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/desktop