Hi Kyle!
I really do like the gradient you introduced in the next email, it give
more depth in my opinion.
I don't mind the wave so much, my other comment still stands - we need
to add more trees or to make them more united to give it more visual
uniformity. Right now they look a bit random, especially the round tree
might seem out of place. Maybe try making them more uniform? For
reference, check out these photos:
https://mir-s3-cdn-cf.behance.net/project_modules/max_1200/d334d348282455.58937275c207e.jpg,
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/17/24/ce/1724ce569c0135da842c49e5e3ac4d0c.jpg,
https://s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/564x/6e/9c/0f/6e9c0f47fe285436886ca6a654515590.jpg
I'm not sure how literal we want to be with the forest, but I'd try
start with smaller trees right on the 'shore' and put bigger ones
behind. See here: http://imgur.com/a/k6cxF
There are a bunch of nice tree silhouettes that we could add here:
https://openclipart.org/search/?query=tree
Also maybe make them less black?
What do you think?
On 03/04/2017 04:08 PM, Kyle Reynolds Conway wrote:
Mo & Maria: Here's a de-waveformed version: http://little.kylerconway.com/uptime/fedora26-no-wave.png
S.Kemter: The smoke effect turned out to be so washed out it was basically invisible with the other gradients. I see below you suggest pulling in another waveform as a pattern background. I'll give that a try.
General note: lot's of wonderful work floating around, everyone!
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