Hi Jonathan,
On 03/01/2017 12:01 PM, Jonathan Petruska wrote:
Any feedback on my design. It isn't very minimalist, but it did match
the theme. I think it looks more like what would be used as a
supplemental though
Ah I thought you were still working on another version so was waiting
for you to send a link to that. The version I saw is here:
https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx/message/TRIZJSMNPX7VFTYWE5RPETRQ3CWFJ254/
I like the color palette; I really love the sci-fi style of the trees.
Definitely goes with the technology theme. I'm not sure the white
waveform running in front of the trees works - it seems kind of noisy
and hard to parse - but where it's just on top of the water and horizon
it gives a kind of neat glow effect, and I wonder if that might look
neat behind the trees instead.
I think the trees are probably a bit too regular and you're going to
want a bit more diversity between them so they don't look like clones.
I think the scene is maybe a bit bare and might do with some more
elements to the texture of the sky and water. The clouds in the
inspiration photo are an example of an environmental element that might
work.
Hope this helps! Thanks for the mockup, it's neat!
~m
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