Hello, > > According to your suggestions and guidelines on my blogpost [1], I > have made another incomplete revision of the poster [2]. Its source is > at [3] (I've tried to follow almost all the guidelines you laid out. > The lower area is empty just as my mind has been wiped clean of ideas > for a while :) Please do something on it if possible. I've CCd it to > tatica and design list too. > > [1] > http://suchakra.wordpress.com/2011/07/16/fudcon-india-2011-design-updates- > 1/#comments [2] > http://suchakra.fedorapeople.org/fudcon-designs/poster_fudcon_india_concep > t_revA.png [3] > http://suchakra.fedorapeople.org/fudcon-designs/poster_fudcon_india-revA.s > vg > ur first version was definitly better because it was simpler. When u make a poster start with an eyecatcher. Work with signal colors or an high contrast. What I doing always is I step a few steps away from the computer and look at it. Look what ur eyes fetch first and if they get attention on the poster. My eye looks first to the fedora sign ;) Why the contrast brings it forward. I like ur pattern that u added in the last 2 versions, I had a similar thing in mind working on a shirt design. Like definitly to idea to use the state sign of india in the font. But now is the attention from the headline gone. Next dont overfill a poster with information. Important are the 5 W nothing more sometimes lesser then 5 What When Where Who Why last one, we dont need in that case. Put that information also very visible on the poster. With so few letters as possible, so dont add "Where" or such really written. The line with "MORE INFO" is secondary information. Ask u self would u remember the short url? No u have to write it down or stay for a while for remembering it. When u have a viewer taken to do this, u can write it smaller and set it to the bottom, he will find it. I hope that information helps u br gnokii > Suchakra > _______________________________________________ > design-team mailing list > design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team