Luya, Publican (the toolchain that produces these documents) has a tight structure built around Products (and their logos), Book Titles and Sub Titles. The elements that are seen in the first mockup are essentially the "Front Cover" of the book, and IMO are needed in this circumstance. Changing these elements is also a lot harder than changing the image that rudi requested, as the tool itself (Publican) would need to be changed. That said, i agree with the word "fedora" being used too much (especially with the non logotype "fedora" that was in my first design) So, with some help and guidance from Rudi and Mo, i decided to go with a simpler text only header to replace the "made with publican" image. A test book with the new image can be viewed here: http://ryanlerch.fedorapeople.org/fedora-docs-logo/html/index.html cheers, ryanlerch On Tue, Nov 17, 2009 at 4:59 AM, Luya Tshimbalanga <luya@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- > Hash: SHA1 > > On 11/16/2009 04:39 AM, Ruediger Landmann wrote: >> On 11/16/2009 06:18 PM, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: >>> Here is illustration the document: >>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/mockup-redundancy.png >>> >>> You noticed there are at least four Fedora names on that page alone >>> which is an overkill >>> for header. >> >> Sorry Luya -- I get a 404 for that URL >> >>> I made illustration for suggestion below: >>> >>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/mockup-suggestion.png >>> >> >> And 404 for this one too. >> >>> I understand about the ears. As highlighted, there are a lot of repeated >>> words. I made an alternate version that preserve "Fedora" wordmark >>> (original color and black version included) for image replacing "Made >>> with Publican" >>> >>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs.png >>> >> >> This isn't bad; but I find the change in colour between the word >> "Fedora" and the word "Documentation" quite jarring. >> >>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs-alt.png >>> >> >> 404 for this one >> >>> http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs.svg > Links fixed. > > > - -- > Luya Tshimbalanga > Graphic & Web Designer > E: luya@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > W: http://www.thefinalzone.net > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- > Version: GnuPG v1.4.10 (GNU/Linux) > > iEYEARECAAYFAksBoR0ACgkQaS6HaNQHFTmOIgCfaiOWY6JiMzx0DHVR1w494zdW > 5qMAn0ZiPOoiA+v3QKUs4q5vQs68kXqQ > =cj9B > -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- > > > _______________________________________________ > design-team mailing list > design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team > > _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
