On 11/16/2009 06:18 PM, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: > Here is illustration the document: > http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/mockup-redundancy.png > > You noticed there are at least four Fedora names on that page alone > which is an overkill > for header. Sorry Luya -- I get a 404 for that URL > I made illustration for suggestion below: > > http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/mockup-suggestion.png > And 404 for this one too. > I understand about the ears. As highlighted, there are a lot of repeated > words. I made an alternate version that preserve "Fedora" wordmark > (original color and black version included) for image replacing "Made > with Publican" > > http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs.png > This isn't bad; but I find the change in colour between the word "Fedora" and the word "Documentation" quite jarring. > http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs-alt.png > 404 for this one > http://luya.fedorapeople.org/images/fedora-docs.svg > The problem with this one is that the final letters of the word "Documentation" get lost when they overlap the book. Could you please check the other links so that I can see what you're suggesting? Thanks for your input on this! Cheers Ruediger _______________________________________________ design-team mailing list design-team@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx https://admin.fedoraproject.org/mailman/listinfo/design-team
