Hi,
good job it's nice but
good job it's nice but
I think that would be better if put a line of color on the edge to improve contrast.
De: Clint Savage <herlo1@xxxxxxxxx>
Para: Fedora Art List <fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx>
Enviado: Mar, 12 Mayo 2009 3:27 pm
Asunto: Re: F11 Sleeve design
On Tue, May 12, 2009 at 12:13 PM, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> Looks good -- a couple ideas to consider:
>
> * Change copyright date to 2009
Done.
>
> * Make the 11 bold and possibly add a glow.
>
Bold is very bulky. The 10 on the Fedora 10 disks is just regular
MgOpen Modata and I think it looks better.
I'm still not decided on the glow. I kind of prefer the basic look.
> * Kern the "11" so the numbers are closer together; due to the font
> metrics they currently look unnaturally far apart.
I think I got that working.
>
> The lion is still pretty busy -- did you want to consider moving the
> design, so the lion appears more to one corner, and the logo and "11"
> appear opposite his head?
I've moved much of the lion off the design. I also removed a lot of
the styles that were there to get this effect. If someone has
problems with what I've done, please let me know and I'll roll it
back.
A new version are available for consideration.
http://herlo.fedorapeople.org/art/F11-live-sleeve.tar.bz2
Cheers,
Clint
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