On Tue, May 12, 2009 at 12:13 PM, Paul W. Frields <stickster@xxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Looks good -- a couple ideas to consider: > > * Change copyright date to 2009 Done. > > * Make the 11 bold and possibly add a glow. > Bold is very bulky. The 10 on the Fedora 10 disks is just regular MgOpen Modata and I think it looks better. I'm still not decided on the glow. I kind of prefer the basic look. > * Kern the "11" so the numbers are closer together; due to the font > metrics they currently look unnaturally far apart. I think I got that working. > > The lion is still pretty busy -- did you want to consider moving the > design, so the lion appears more to one corner, and the logo and "11" > appear opposite his head? I've moved much of the lion off the design. I also removed a lot of the styles that were there to get this effect. If someone has problems with what I've done, please let me know and I'll roll it back. A new version are available for consideration. http://herlo.fedorapeople.org/art/F11-live-sleeve.tar.bz2 Cheers, Clint _______________________________________________ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@xxxxxxxxxx http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
