On Wed, 2008-10-15 at 18:38 +0300, Nicu Buculei wrote: > Bill Nottingham wrote: [...snip...] > > The poster on http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/F10Themes/Solar - > > it doesn't appear to be valid English, certainly not in the header. > > And I'm not sure what "an all branded new way of technology" is. > > The post is not part of the release and should not be a blocker for > packaging (and I agree with you, its wording can be improved - we don't > have a better text from marketing). I forwarded to Marketing for some input. Also, I think the radar echoes (or whatever you want to call those concentric circles) look out of place. I think these came from the Live USB creation station. Removing them could make the art a little cleaner. It also might look cool to bring the solar body closer to the viewer -- i.e. seeing less of the sun, with less curvature, as if you were flying close the surface. This might help accent the idea that the viewer is supposed to be excited by what's coming, and it's not fully revealed yet. -- Paul W. Frields gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://paul.frields.org/ - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug
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