Re: Federal air marshal shoots passenger on MIA jetway

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No excuse.  While I see no problem with keeping the URL, the body of the story should agree with the rest of the story AND the headline.  I consider it to be a bad case of editing,  How many people will see the first story but not the update and think the guy lived?


David R


-------------- Original message -------------- 
From: "Michael C. Berch" <mcb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> 

> The passenger died of injuries in the hospital not long after the 
> shooting. He was apparently not killed instantly. So CNN rewrote the 
> headline and the lead, and may have left a true (but not up to date) 
> reference to the condition of the passenger, later in the story. 
> Also, CNN like a number of other news sites updates breaking stories 
> in place, without changing the URL. The short summary I copied and 
> pasted from the CNN main page was static, while the contents of the 
> story behind the link were dynamic. 
> 
> In other words, not bad reporting, but an artifact of dynamic 
> updating of online news. 
> 
> -- 
> Michael C. Berch 
> mcb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx 
> 
> 
> On Dec 7, 2005, at 1:04 PM, David MR wrote: 
> > The CNN headline says "Passemger killed after claiming to have a 
> > bomb." The CNN article says in the opening paragraph "Federal air 
> > marshals shot and killed a 44-year-old U.S. citizen..." yet just a 
> > few paragraphs later it says the citizen was wounded. 
> > 
> > This is why I check other sources when reading a CNN article 
> > involving aviation or plolitics - I want to make sure I get the 
> > correct story. At least they got the number of pax that an AA 757 
> > can carry correct 
> > 
> > David R 
> > 
> > -------------- Original message -------------- 
> > From: "Michael C. Berch" 
> >> Police: Shot fired on Miami airport Jetway 
> >> BREAKING NEWS 
> >> Police: Shot fired on Miami airport Jetway 
> >> 
> >> A federal air marshal shot and wounded a passenger on the Jetway 
> >> connecting an American Airlines plane to Miami International Airport, 
> >> sources told CNN. The marshal's action came after threatening action 
> >> by the passenger, a federal government official said. The Federal Air 
> >> Marshals Service confirmed a marshal fired his weapon while the 
> >> Boeing 757 -- which was en route from Medellin, Colombia, to Orlando, 
> >> Florida -- was on the ground at Miami. 
> >> 
> >> Full story: http://www.cnn.com/2005/US/12/07/airplane.gunshot/ 
> >> index.html 
> >> 
> >> -- 
> >> Michael C. Berch 
> >> mcb@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx 
> > 

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