Re: last questions, notes about static page

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Join and get fedora pages are missing encoding defs.
Why there is H1 saying "Fedora 7 Now available" and the rest says FC6?

Adam Pribyl

On Thu, 24 May 2007, Karsten Wade wrote:

I'm pretty happy with the language now; my "pretty much final" edits are
in and live (soon).

The tempting link "Learn more >>" goes to a Wiki page.  Do we want to
make a new, static version of that page, at least for the F7
launch-frame?  I think, yes.

I changed the "leading edge" stuff to read:

"The Fedora Project leads the advancement of free and open source
software. When you use Fedora, this software is in your hands."

I also trimmed out a bunch of extraneous language, made passive to
active voice changes, dropped distracting pronouns, and tried to reduce
the hype-speech ("the most bestest ev4r!!!!1!!!").

== FC6 to F7 conversion ==

In addition to updating the images, the following needs to be updated:

* Direct links to FC6 Installation Guide need to point to F7 version
* ???

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Odchozi zprava neobsahuje viry, protoze nebyla odeslana z Windows.
Otestovano zdarma a legalne na OS Linux.
(Proc pouzivat Linux - http://proc.linux.cz/).


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