El jue, 04-06-2020 a las 11:34 -0400, Ben Cotton escribió: > Hi Héctor, > I took a pass at your article. I've made a few fairly > significantedits, so please review it and let me know what you think. > A shortsummary: > * Removed footnotes and references in favor of inline links* Removed > use of first person* Removed the outline at the beginning* Put the > installation instructions before the usage instructions* Removed the > explanation of MIME types because it distracts from thepurpose of > this article (but it might be a good idea for a standalonearticle at > some point)* Left off the "install the desktop file for everyone" > option to keepthe instructions simple* Voice changes like "Pressing > the Insert key will add" -> "Press theInsert key to add"* Simplified > the headers* General style edits to conform with > https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/ > > Removing some of the diversions shortens the article a fair amount. > Itwould benefit from an example or two of how you use Freeplane in > reallife. Right now the usage is a small part of the article. Do you > thinkyou'd be able to add that? > -- all your adjust, make the article look really great.. thx for this: following your suggestion I've added the Header -> How you can add suggestion in your everyday life? with a personal example and add an image attached Regards., ---------------------------------------------- Héctor Louzao @hhlp He / Him / His Fedora Project Contributor https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/User:Hhlp TZ=Europe/Madrid _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
