Hi Héctor, I took a pass at your article. I've made a few fairly significant edits, so please review it and let me know what you think. A short summary: * Removed footnotes and references in favor of inline links * Removed use of first person * Removed the outline at the beginning * Put the installation instructions before the usage instructions * Removed the explanation of MIME types because it distracts from the purpose of this article (but it might be a good idea for a standalone article at some point) * Left off the "install the desktop file for everyone" option to keep the instructions simple * Voice changes like "Pressing the Insert key will add" -> "Press the Insert key to add" * Simplified the headers * General style edits to conform with https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/fedora-magazine/tips-for-writers/ Removing some of the diversions shortens the article a fair amount. It would benefit from an example or two of how you use Freeplane in real life. Right now the usage is a small part of the article. Do you think you'd be able to add that? -- Ben Cotton He / Him / His Senior Program Manager, Fedora & CentOS Stream Red Hat TZ=America/Indiana/Indianapolis _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
