Now with more Nick! (I'm not sure why the @fedoraproject.org mail bounced) On Wed, May 13, 2020 at 4:51 PM Ben Cotton <bcotton@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Nick, > > I took a pass at combining two of your Silverblue articles into a single > article as we discussed earlier today: > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=31001&preview=1&_ppp=0550e7e4ed > > This was a pretty deep surgery at times, so I won't list all of the edits > I made. Here's the high-level view: > * I tried to organize it into a logical flow, the headers should make this > clear > * Most of the content comes directly from your two articles (sometimes > re-ordered from where you originally had them), but I did insert a few > sentences here and there to fix the flow > * I added a little more to the end to give it a soft landing > > I'm happy to discuss any questions on-list or in #fedora-magazine (I'm > generally around from 1300-2100 UTC, give or take). If you don't have any > objections, I'll get this scheduled for Friday morning. If you do have > objections, we'll converge on an agreeable solution. > > > Thanks, > BC > > -- > Ben Cotton > He / Him / His > Senior Program Manager, Fedora & CentOS Stream > Red Hat > TZ=America/Indiana/Indianapolis > -- Ben Cotton He / Him / His Senior Program Manager, Fedora & CentOS Stream Red Hat TZ=America/Indiana/Indianapolis _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
