Nick, I took a pass at combining two of your Silverblue articles into a single article as we discussed earlier today: https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=31001&preview=1&_ppp=0550e7e4ed This was a pretty deep surgery at times, so I won't list all of the edits I made. Here's the high-level view: * I tried to organize it into a logical flow, the headers should make this clear * Most of the content comes directly from your two articles (sometimes re-ordered from where you originally had them), but I did insert a few sentences here and there to fix the flow * I added a little more to the end to give it a soft landing I'm happy to discuss any questions on-list or in #fedora-magazine (I'm generally around from 1300-2100 UTC, give or take). If you don't have any objections, I'll get this scheduled for Friday morning. If you do have objections, we'll converge on an agreeable solution. Thanks, BC -- Ben Cotton He / Him / His Senior Program Manager, Fedora & CentOS Stream Red Hat TZ=America/Indiana/Indianapolis _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Fedora Code of Conduct: https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/project/code-of-conduct/ List Guidelines: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Mailing_list_guidelines List Archives: https://lists.fedoraproject.org/archives/list/magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
