Re: Reworking article

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On Mon, Jul 30, 2018 at 03:45:10PM +0200, Davide Caratti wrote:
> On Wed, 2018-07-18 at 17:28 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote:
> > Hi Davide,
> > 
> > The Magazine editorial board reviewed the pitch/draft you submitted to
> > the Magazine about PMF.  We liked the idea that this content helps
> > users solve a problem they may run into if they upgrade to Fedora 28.
> > However, it was also very detailed in ways that will probably deter
> > readers from reading the article.
> 
> (cc-ing Francesco as he reviewed the post)
> 
> sorry for answering late: I was on vacation in the last two weeks.
> 
> I felt the need for adding some details on how to troubleshoot PMF on
> fedora, as we are receiving many bugzilla notifications from users
> experiencing wifi connectivity troubles, and almost all of them relate to
> PMF.
> 
> All users restored connectivity by disabling PMF with nmcli, like I
> suggest at the end of the second chapter. Nevertheless, PMF is a security
> improvement and users should use it if the Access Point is advertising to
> be MFP-Capable.
> 
> These problems are not a bug in wpa_supplicant. Most of the times they are
> caused by bugs in wireless drivers (specially Intel), Rarely, they are
> misconfigurations / bugs in the Access Point. In both cases, a software
> upgrade containing a fix will not probably happen in a short time.
> 
> 
> So, I tried to do a comprehensive text trying to anticipate the "WiFi
> sucks on Fedora" rant (before we see another 'WiFi sucks' rant, like it
> happened with [1]).
> 
> > Could you rework this article to be simpler, and eliminating some of
> > the unnecessary technical details?  We don't assume all users are
> > stupid.  But on the other hand, readers have a limited attention span
> > according to our metrics, so the Magazine aims for higher readability,
> > and articles that focus on their problem and how to solve it.
> > 
> > Let us know what you think.
> 
> Stupid people just don't exist. Anyway, even though I can assume all
> readers can upgrade/downgrade an rpm, and see a wireless connection
> problem apperaing/disappearing, I'm not 100% sure they know how ciphers
> are negotiated between Access Points and clients in a managed BSS.
> 
> after a fresh re-read, I think I can get rid of this paragraph
> 
> <<
> Like other features in the 802.11 standard, PMF is designed to be
> backwards-compatible. It is possible to configure the desired PMF
> enforcement level, both on the Access Point and on the client, depending
> on the desired trade-off between protection and interoperability:
> 
>     PMF Disabled: no protection present, nor required.
>     PMF Optional: protect only frames sent to nodes that advertise the PMF
> capability, and keep transmitting unprotected frames to other “legacy”
> nodes.
>     PMF Required: only associate/accept association if the peer node is
> PMF-capable
> 
> When a client associates to an AP, and both nodes have PMF enabled (with
> ‘Optional’ or ‘Required’), they will negotiate the cipher suite that is
> going to be used for MICs. Negotiation will be successful if the two nodes
> (usually the Access Point and the client) will agree on one of the ciphers
> belonging to the BIP (Broadcast Integrity Protection) Group Management
> suite. Within wpa_supplicant it’s possible to specify the algorithm among
> a set of available cipher suites, that are made available by the NIC
> hardware, or by the kernel crypto library, or both. All these information
> can be read in the RSN Information Element (i.e. the MFP Capable and the
> MFP Required bit in the RSN Capabilities subelement, and the BIP Group
> Management Suite listing the configured ciphers).
> 
> >>
> 
> We can remove it, many users read the system log and attach it to
> bugzilla; almost nobody attachs EAPOL traces (and it's not trivial to
> capture auth/deauth packets).
> 
> Alternatively, I can publish this post "as-is" elsewhere, and write a
> small introductive chapter for fedora magazine.
> 
> WDYT?
> 
> thanks!
> -- 
> davide
> 
> [1] http://blog.cerowrt.org/post/disabling_channel_scans/

Hi Davide, thanks for the note back.  I think, based on your
explanation here, your second suggestion might be a better fit for the
magazine.  

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