That reads much better. Thanks Paul! On Sun, 2018-04-29 at 11:22 -0400, Paul Frields wrote: > I made an editorial pass on the Files article and it seems ready for > tomorrow: > https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=20949&preview=1&_ppp=4d97a48977 > > The tweaks were mainly for readability (shorter sentences, breaking > up > paragraphs slightly, less passive voice where possible), and adding > some > subheadings. I also added a screenshot of the Starred feature. > > Paul > > > On Tue, Apr 24, 2018 at 1:03 AM, Link Dupont <link@xxxxxxxxxxx> > wrote: > > > Update to this article plan. > > > > The talking points[1] are a much more concise list and description > > of > > features more suitable for a "What's New" article. I will leave > > that as > > a separate article to be drafted or written by whomever. > > > > The content of *this* article has possibly changed too. My main > > motivation for writing a "GNOME 3.28 features" article was to > > create a > > medium to communicate some contentious changes to Nautilus in 3.28. > > Upon feedback from some of the folks on the GNOME engagement team, > > I > > have rewritten the section on desktop icons as a much longer piece. > > I > > feel like it might be worthy of an article on its own. My draft is > > here[2]. > > > > I can either propose it as a standalone article, or include it in a > > summary of GNOME 3.28 features. Is this worthy of an article by > > itself? > > > > 1: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fedora_28_talking_points#Fedora_W > > orks > > tation > > > > 2: https://wiki.gnome.org/LinkDupont/FilesDesktopIcons > > > > On Sat, 2018-04-21 at 10:11 -0700, Link Dupont wrote: > > > Editors, > > > > > > I wrote a section about the desktop icon removal. The rest of the > > > article is still being written, but this section is particularly > > > hot. > > > I'd like to get as much input and attention as possible on it. > > > Could > > > someone take a look? > > > > > > Link > > > > > > On Fri, 2018-04-20 at 15:55 -0400, Paul W. Frields wrote: > > > > On Wed, Apr 18, 2018 at 07:51:54AM -0700, Link Dupont wrote: > > > > > Sure. I was planning on "porting" the upstream GNOME release > > > > > notes > > > > > to > > > > > Fedora's implementation. I suppose it's time I upgrade to > > > > > F28. > > > > > ^_^ > > > > > > > > > > I also wanted to cover the removal of desktop icons from > > > > > Nautilus. > > > > > I know > > > > > it's controversial, but I believe that if we can get that > > > > > news > > > > > out > > > > > and into > > > > > the hands of users ahead of the release, the potential > > > > > fallout > > > > > and > > > > > pitchforking will be less severe. > > > > > > > > I don't disagree at all. I think we'll likely get some > > > > trolling in > > > > the incoming comments, but typically we just trash those. > > > > > > > > -- > > > > Paul W. Frields http://paul.frie > > > > lds. > > > > or > > > > g/ > > > > gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 > > > > BD11 > > > > 3717 > > > > http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeopl > > > > e.or > > > > g/ > > > > The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource. > > > > com > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > > g > > > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproj > > > > ect. > > > > or > > > > g > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraprojec > > > t.or > > > g > > > > _______________________________________________ > > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@lists.fedoraproject. > > org > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > g
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