The main things missing are the bits I noted below. Everything else seems fine to me. On Wed, Feb 07, 2018 at 05:37:15PM +0200, Aivar Annamaa wrote: > Hi! > > Sorry for the delay. The current version is just my initial braindump and > I'll try to complete it soon. > > Can you already say something about it? Is there something big I should > change? Is the length acceptable? > > best regards, > Aivar > > > On 7.02.2018 15:24, Paul W. Frields wrote: > > On Fri, Jan 05, 2018 at 04:48:47PM -0500, Paul W. Frields wrote: > > > On Mon, Dec 18, 2017 at 11:53:19AM +0200, Aivar Annamaa wrote: > > > > *https://fedoramagazine.org/?p=19717 > > > We approved this pitch in Wednesday's meeting. > > > > > > The editors recommended you cut out the last two sections here (small > > > features, overview of project) to keep the article focused. > > > > > > You can start drafting anytime! > > Aivar, do you intend to finish this article? It's missing some > > screenshots and code snippets still. We'd like to publish this but we > > can't until we have a complete draft. > > > _______________________________________________ > Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx -- Paul W. Frields http://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ The open source story continues to grow: http://opensource.com _______________________________________________ Fedora Magazine mailing list -- magazine@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx To unsubscribe send an email to magazine-leave@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
