RE: End-user documentation for 7.x

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Hi Jonas,

Great stuff - for a relative 'low-skill-level' 7.x admin like myself this
will really help.

One small grammer thing that I'd like to suggest:

>yum (Yellow dog Updater, Modified) is an automatic updater and package
installer/remover for RPM systems. It will help you keeping your system up
to date and is used by Fedora Core, the successor of Red Hat Linux.
Unfortunately, it wasn't included in 7.x releases of Red Hat Linux, but we
have prepared a package for you to get the full yum functionality on your
existing system<

Suggestion: Second sentence change to:
It will help you to keep your system up to date and is used by Fedora Core,
the successor of Red Hat Linux.


Sean


-----Original Message-----
From: fedora-legacy-list-admin@xxxxxxxxxx
[mailto:fedora-legacy-list-admin@xxxxxxxxxx]On Behalf Of Jonas Pasche
Sent: January 19, 2004 11:50 AM
To: fedora-legacy-list@xxxxxxxxxx
Subject: End-user documentation for 7.x


Hi folks,

I've written end-user documentation for users of Red Hat Linux 7.x -
please review it and send feedback to me or to the list for discussion:

http://jonaspasche.de/fedoralegacy/enduser-rh7x.html

The page reflects the fact that yum hasn't been a part of 7.x, and it
shows a straightforward way to use Fedora Legacy on without explaining
too much details that aren't needed for basic usage.

If discussion of this page is finished, I'll rework it for 8.0
(including information on How to upgrade RPM and How to check if yum is
already installed).

When both docs are ready and published, I'd suggest to put a link to
that page on the "Download" page as many people simply try to skip the
docs and go directly to the downloads, which isn't appropriate here.

Jonas




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