Good effort! A bit too specific perhaps, you seem to be targeting KNOPPIX specifically, when there's so many distros. Some of the inctructions are basically duplicated from instructions found elsewhere - like compiling from Git. It is recommended that in those sections, you link to the appropriate Wiki articles instead. Also, consider that from here on, you'll need to maintain the instructions all by yourself. That includes when something changes and the instructions break. It wouldn't look good if instructions on the official site were to be wrong... ;)
