Re: [PATCH 07/12] hwclock: update --help content and grammar

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On Sun, Jun 18, 2017 at 08:45:09PM -0400, J William Piggott wrote:
> 
> Signed-off-by: J William Piggott <elseifthen@xxxxxxx>
> ---
>  include/c.h         |  4 ++--
>  sys-utils/hwclock.c | 48 +++++++++++++++++++++---------------------------
>  2 files changed, 23 insertions(+), 29 deletions(-)
> 
> diff --git a/include/c.h b/include/c.h
> index 9c19965..bd073fc 100644
> --- a/include/c.h
> +++ b/include/c.h
> @@ -319,8 +319,8 @@ static inline int xusleep(useconds_t usec)
>  #define USAGE_OPTIONS    _("\nOptions:\n")
>  #define USAGE_FUNCTIONS  _("\nFunctions:\n")
>  #define USAGE_SEPARATOR    "\n"
> -#define USAGE_HELP       _(" -h, --help     display this help and exit\n")
> -#define USAGE_VERSION    _(" -V, --version  output version information and exit\n")
> +#define USAGE_HELP       _(" -h, --help     display this information and exit\n")

 "display this help and exit\n"
or
 "display help information and exit\n"

sounds better than "this information".

> +#define USAGE_VERSION    _(" -V, --version  display version information and exit\n")

This is better than the original.

    Karel

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 Karel Zak  <kzak@xxxxxxxxxx>
 http://karelzak.blogspot.com
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